Spirit Guide high-five!
Meet UD3 Division Chief Cole Nantaje. And Bacho.
Letoa couldn’t see Nantaje, of course, but because of Manaia, she knew he was there. And because of Bacho, Nantaje knew that she knew. And she knew that he knew that she knew — well, you get the idea.
As you have probably figured out, the Unusual and Dangerous Developments Division is our story’s version of “Fringe Division” or “The X-Files.” Essentially, as technology and discovery advances, new law enforcement divisions have to be created to deal with possible threats. The FBI already had to create a “Cyber Division” in 2002 and a “Weapons of Mass Destruction Directorate” in 2006. The UD3 is for even freakier but increasingly-likely possibilities, such as force fields, time travel, negative matter, quantum entanglement, antigravity, zombie outbreaks, and of course, teleportation.
And if you are running such a division and you discover a smart, capable, butt-kicking female detective who also happens to have supernatural abilities — well, she basically gets to write her own ticket.
As it happens, Max-The-Artist is acquainted with a young woman who is an FBI agent and who was in fact fast-tracked through Quantico. The FBI wanted her that much. She’s one of those mega-people you meet sometimes who are just so damn good at everything you just want to scream. And they are invariably attractive as well. So yeah, she’s basically Letoa in real life, only without the Spirit Guardian (as far as we know.)
Plus! A new Vote Incentive! It’s a heroic-fantasy-themed art piece Max created that is pretty damn sweet. Check it out!
More below!
Bobservations
First Impressions
My father, a noted theoretical physicist, once wrote a book called Indistinguishable From Magic in which he explored a lot of the above-mentioned science-fiction concepts and detailed ways in which they might theoretically be accomplished. It is NOT light reading; it has a buttload of math and physics, and some of it is fairly dated these days. But it isn’t blue-sky speculation, either. For instance, he details how to make a working time machine. It does require spinning a mass at an appreciable fraction of the speed of light, and it would only allow you to travel back in time to the point at which the machine was originally turned on. But while we can’t do that yet, there’s no real reason why we couldn’t do it eventually. Need funding? No problem – just send yesterday’s winning lotto numbers back a week.
You could cause a lot of trouble with a machine like that.
Or force fields? Just postulating here, but if you can build one that deflects alpha particles, perhaps use it to surround a mildly-radioactive substance (such as a thorium lantern mantle) and let things cook for a while. Then turn it off. Preferably from a distance.
The closer we get to being able to do things like that, the more we’ll start to need something like the UD3. At least for the purposes of this comic.
But back to first impressions — one of my favorite stories from my father’s life started when he was a boy, building his own ham radios out of scrounged parts. He noticed that whenever he burned out a selenium rectifier, it looked exactly the same, but he knew it had fried because it gave off an odor like burned cabbage.
Later, as a young man, he came out of the Air Force ROTC program with a degree in physics, a rank of 2nd Lieutenant, and a ham radio background. So the brass put him in charge of a radar installation at Shaw AFB. This meant that he was supposed to be commanding a bunch of Technical Sergeants who had vastly more experience with radar than he did. Not an easy task.
Blessedly, as he showed up, the whole place was a beehive of activity. The radar equipment had failed, and Tech Sergeants were crawling all over it, cursing. The last thing they needed was a snot-nosed Second Looie showing up getting in the way. But my father detected that old familiar smell of burnt cabbage.
“Your selenium rectifier is fried,” he said.
Naturally, his declaration was treated with barely-concealed contempt, until an hour later when it was discovered that the selenium rectifier was indeed burned out. He was given a lot more respect after that.
So assuming Letoa makes it through the 20-week course at Quantico, she’ll be joining the UD3. It’s doubtful that she and Scales will ever be besties. But at least he knows now that she’s not to be messed with.
These first impressions are so important.
— Bob out
Okay…………..
So we’ve got a sushi Rockafeller and a flea bitten mutt going up against Sophie, who so far has done quite a bit to make sure that Max doesn’t join her anytime soon
Thing are getting really interesting around here
Add in a couple proton packs and we might just have us a party!
I don’t think fleas can find that particular canine. What the heck is Leota’s familiar, though.
Looks like a large (very large) crustacean. I would almost say a nautilus, but it doesn’t quite match it.
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Ghost fleas!
Just speculating here, but it makes me think of a cross between a beholder, a nautilus, and.. er, Cthulhu.
I can see Cthulhu and the nautilus, but not the beholder.
The most obvious thing about a beholder is its eyes. The beholder has one large, central eye and an array (anywhere from 6 to 12, depending of the source of your info) of smaller eyes on stalks atop its visage.This familiar has two eyes, located in binocular fashion (as a predator would have).
Also, the beholder has a large, tooth-filled mouth (also like a predator). The familiar doesn’t show one.
Octopus, my friends.
binocular vision – tentacles – the works (even a spiracle).
UD3, I will match your closet full of lame-ass guardian spirits with a full blown guardian angel who is not afraid to reach out and slap you silly when the boyfriend is tired and feeling a little punchy.
Whoa!!!
No wonder she knew she could ‘buck’ the powers-that-be and was so certain her demands would be accepted.
That Countdown must be stopped! You tell ’em, Letoa! Damn Vigilante, breaking the Laws and ignoring the Rules! We’d never catch you doing that sort of thing, riiiiiiiight? 😉
Yeah but she IS above the law. Apparently.
https://youtu.be/itmNiTwHOsM?t=19
Hee. That particular irony was not lost on me during scripting, but it is a notorious blind spot in many law enforcement types. Or as Pratchett’s Sam Vimes once put it: “It’s different when it’s me doing it.”
Also, regarding the vote incentive: Wow, that Marissa really goes all-out on her cosplay, doesn’t she? I mean, the costume and weaponry are impressive enough by themselves, but it mast have taken her forever to genetically engineer the giant birds and insects. 😀
She’s clearly into LARPing. 😉 Anyone interested in downloading a higher res version can visit my gumroad: https://gumroad.com/maxforward. Donations much appreciated!
That image is totally worth the wait, Max
Thanks Prairie Son!
That’s an interesting way to make friends, but if it works, it works.
Somehow, I can’t vote for 3mm, either through the provided links or directly from the TWC website…
I really like Letoa… with our gangster friend and Max, this is going to make for an interesting “threesome”! lol!
Looks like the voting site is having trouble, so maybe try again later. The voting really does help us attract new readers to the site!
Honestly, rushed thru training and given everything they want sounds exactly the opposite of how the FBI would do things. Even if they were looking to recruit “special” talents. Especially with someone who has shown they have no respect for things like the chain of command.
Have exam tomorrow. Read this instead. 😛
This is great work, guys. Seriously, the more I read the more I thought ‘Wow. How have I not found this before?’
Welcome MatrixM! Feel free to recommend us to any other friends with important exams pending 🙂
Especially ones on engineering, physics, and other related subjects hehe.
She forgot to mention that this teleportation technology has also displayed the ability to deliver explosives.. but she was busy putting the slapdown on the agents, so I suppose it can be forgiven 😉
And Letoa found an interesting way to save herself when being called onto the carpet, but not one generally available.. unless you happen to have a guardian spirit, and the people calling you onto the carpet’s boss also has a guardian familiar.
For anyone curious:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Quantico,_Virginia
You know what I like most about this page? The beads of sweat starting to burst out on Agent Scales. This guy can’t play poker at ALL! (in other words, nicely drawn, it’s the small touches that go far).
The Division Chief doesn’t show up just to watch some random cop get chewed out, he would certainly have done his homework on Letoa well beforehand (or had someone do the homework for him) and since he has a spirit, he would have known about that aspect also. He knew just who and what he was dealing with and what to expect when it came to Letoa, and appears to have just tossed his poor subordinate Scales into the Lion’s den without warning. Kind of a jerk way to treat your employees, now that I think about it. (Or maybe Scales had it coming, I don’t know him that well yet.)
Could have been a test. See if Letoa knows she has a guardian spirit.
Or he could have been there because there was a freaking Teleporter Vigilante and he’s observing all the interviews involved.
Ooh, DEO(DC comics) and Bureau 13 for the 21st century!
Oh, I used to read the Bureau 13 books myself!
Not me, just played the Take 2 PC game occasionally.
I’m surmising that Cole is an American Indian. Which nation, though?
I’m guessing Navajo, given their long history with the US military as codetalkers.
WELL!
I knew your name was Forward. I knew your father was a Scientist.
BUT
Robert L Forward – “Indistinguishable From Magic.” Whoohee. 🙂