“No Good Deed” — Cover — Page One
A smash intro! Literally!
Episode Five launches with a quick peek at Countdown’s Strike Armor Version 1.2 – (assuming the original overly bulky and heavy standard-Kevlar bomb-squad-style armor suit in the beginning of Episode One was Version 1, and the trimmed-down-but-not-bulletproof carbon fiber fighting gear he’s had for most of the episodes up ’till now was Version 1.1)
Max-The-Artist has designed some very cool Version 2.0 Strike Armor, but for this story – which takes place just a short time after the previous pages – Madison hasn’t finished it yet. So this episode features the Strike-Armor-In-Progress, but it’s already a considerable improvement, tactically. The “no metal or electronics” rule still holds, but Countdown’s now sporting graphene laminate/gel composite plate over the vital impact areas and woven carbon nanotube micromesh everywhere else, along with a superpolycarbonate visor. The chest timer is chemlume, as always.
Neither graphene/gel composite plate armor nor carbon nanotube micromesh exist yet, so far as I know, but that wouldn’t stop Madison. And the way things are going these days, they may actually be created by the time we finish this story, so I wanted to get a jump on incorporating them for our purposes.
Suitable weapons have been designed and will be coming, but for now it’s just the armor. Despite appearances, it’s even lighter and more maneuverable than his carbon-fiber gear, and has the added advantage of being fairly bullet resistant, although it takes damage. But will it stop a round from a high-powered sniper rifle? Not something you’d want to bet on. Especially if you happen to be wearing it at the time.
Oh, and for those wondering — yep, ankle’s still busted. But for Countdown in battle mode, that’s just a minor inconvenience. Stay tuned!
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New Vote Incentive! More of Max’s heroic fantasy art, this time in space! Check it out!
More below!
Bobservations
DAT GLASS
The rough for this piece of cover art had a smashing window in it. Now, of course Max-The-Artist could just draw lots of little pieces of window glass, but I had been wanting to shoot some 4K glass smashes, and this gave me an incentive to get started. And let me tell you, I need incentive when it comes to glass.
Fire is okay. Explosions are no problem. But glass? Man, what a pain. I’ve got various pieces of scrap glass collected and stored, but I keep putting off shooting it because it’s such a stone bitch to deal with.
To start with, lighting it is so hard. It’s either completely invisible or it’s reflecting all sorts of things you don’t want it to reflect. And that’s just glass holding still. If you’re planning to smash it, you end up having to create some sort of rig that is sturdy enough to hold a heavy-yet-fragile sheet of glass, yet won’t get in the way of the shot. And then you have to throw just a buttload of light on it — without allowing any of the light to hit the backdrop.
Like I said, a pain. Three thousand watts worth of halogen worklights, clearly illuminating something which, if I have everything right, will be invisible up until the moment it shatters.
The shatter, at least, is fairly simple. High-powered slingshot. Due to a misspent youth, I’m actually pretty good with one, and it works just as well as a bullet for the purpose.
See the glass? No? Good.
So start the camera, back out of frame, and fire.
SMASH! YAAAY! Lots and lots of tiny little razor-sharp shards of non-biodegradable glass!
Have I mentioned that I go barefoot in the summer?
Naturally, I had a large tarp spread out below, but naturally, the tarp never manages to catch everything. Three sheets of glass crashed into splinters and shards for this shoot, and even with the tarp and an hour’s sweeping, I’m still seeing telltale glitters from crevices in the concrete — just enough to catch my eye as I walk by, but not so clear that I can find them when I go looking for them with a brush and dustpan.
But they’ll turn up. Eventually. Usually in the bottoms of my feet.
But I will say the footage looked great, it keyed up nicely, and Max-The-Artist was able to incorporate a number of frames in the above cover, suitably enhanced with filters and motion blur. Of course the real star is his artwork, but I always enjoy contributing a little sliver of help where I can. Ha.
Really makes me appreciate fire, though!
— Bob out
Nice look, Max. Looking like a true paladin!
Glad you like it!
You’re welcome! Now that I look at it on a bigger screen, he kinda looks like an armadillo. Which isn’t a bad thing.
That new armour looks great. I love the idea of costume evolution to fit the story.
Thanks Dan! Dan’s the amazing creator of Vanguard, a webcomic both Dad and I admire greatly, so Dan knows all about the struggle of designing awesome superhero costumes.
I really think you could do an awesome gallery of broken glass shots…which, I realize, you just said, you wouldn’t want to do…but that one sample shot just makes me want to see more, at different timing, in high resolution.
Actually, a selection of the keyed images will be added to the Bob’s Bundle shortly, and the footage will be added to my other sites. It’s all primarily tools/reference for people that want them, but it does get used!
As far as future armor goes, you might want to look into non-newtoanian Fluids/Dalatan Fluids. They can offer considerable stab-resistance. Down to bounching arrows of a Kevlar Cloth.
It is a basic impact reactive armor that can be added to normal armor:
http://grrlpowercomic.com/archives/1735
It is flexible to wear. Yet as rigid as a Ceramic plate vs. impacts.
Ah, the word Christopher is looking for is Oobleck, or one of the trademarked names for it that already exist from BAE.
Liquid body armor was originally developed by the University of Delaware chemical engineering professor Dr. Norman J.Wagner and USArmy
Research Laboratory staff member Dr. Eric D. Wetzel, in 2002.
Good thoughts! Countdown’s armor needs to have some basic exterior rigidity for optimum efficiency as offensive weaponry (you don’t really want to hit people with padded clubs) but internal gel layers are a good idea and won’t change the look. So I’ve added that to the description above.
The cool thing about the fluid armors is that they are soft if you push against them, but rigid if struck, thus the ‘non-newtonian’ label.
Any impact, bullet or fist, hits a rigid surface- the fluid has no ‘give’ to a quick-moving object. The current NNF armor panels are 10 layers of kevlar that are flooded with the nanogel, which is about half the thickness of a flack jacket.
However, the slow blade penetrates the shield… so Dune was right.
Oobleck? That name has shown up in my favorite (actually ONLY) anemei… RWBY.
That name is a professor who seems to move fast enough under even classroom environments to cause a sonic boom.
Though he considers himself a scientist, he’s not someone you’d want angry at you.
Guys this looks fantastic! I can’t wait to see where the story is going to go to next =D
Thanks so much, Alli! And thank you again for your fabulous guest art!
Due to my own misspent youth, may I note that a ShopVac is pretty good at getting
evidencethings out of the cracks in basement floors and walls?D’oh! And I’ve got an old shop vac buried in the back of the garage. I hadn’t even considered it because I’d lost all the hose attachments years ago during the move from Unit K, but it turns out that there’s this thing now called “Amazon Prime” which will send me a new selection of glass-sweeping attachments by Wednesday. This modern world!
I love how much attention to detail you seem to feature in this story. There are whole buttloads of information that I usually don’t see (and a depressing amount that I never even thought about). It makes the story more believable.
Positively love the technical details ( military oriented nerd/ LEO for the past 20 years here).
Bob and I had a long email discussion about nonmetallic weapons back when this thing first launched. The wait to see what the Forwards decided on is killing me.
*Waits for the techie people to read this comic and say ‘You know what? Let’s see if we Can build some of that stuff.’
truthfully, I’d more expect them to say “hmmm… leave it to the SciFi writers to come up with another way to fix the problem. Let’s look into it.”
Wow! That vote incentive art is rad! I recognize Rocket, but who are the other two?
not rocket… 😉 but thanks!
Oops! Sorry, but, to me, all gun-toting raccoons look alike to me ^_^;
She’s CLEARLY a skunk/squirrel 🙂
(Looks again.) So she is! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧
So…she’s a Squnk? (And an excellent Squnk she is, indeed!)
I’m stealing this, just FYI