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Our hero arrives in all his spectacular glory and promptly gets shot in the face. One of the problems in dealing with crazy is you kinda lose what one reader cleverly termed the “WTF advantage.” In his current state Hayes probably sees more startling things before breakfast.
And more below!
Bobservations
A Sudden Intrusion
It’s not like it really matters for the purposes of the comic; we have a story we’re telling here, and various things will be revealed in due time. But in light of the commentary discussion, I did go pester Mark (the retired-LAPD-sergeant-next-door) about how often the LAPD actually have to deal with hostage situations. He said they were “more common than you’d think; maybe one or two a month” but that they didn’t always involve SWAT. Many times it’ll be someone trying to escape the police by grabbing a hostage, or trying to hide in someone’s occupied house. In those cases, it is still considered a “hostage situation” although the police generally handle it on the spot.
More often the police are dealing with a “barricaded suspect;” someone who is armed and has managed to take cover in a defensible area but does not actually have any hostages. These are all serious police matters and have to be dealt with, but they’re not really a situation where Countdown would get involved. As for how the Strike Team finds situations; police communications are encrypted but that wouldn’t stop Marissa. A few search algorithms, some judicious monitoring… oh, and for this particular story, Madison wanting to do some distance testing. So here we are. Oh, and Max did draw a cast on Countdown’s left ankle there, but it kinda got hidden by the flame effects.
I was intrigued by another commenter’s suggestion of two different situations happening at once; I’ll have to give that some pondering for the future. Given Countdown’s innate time constraints, that would certainly make for a pretty busy fifteen minutes or so.
All this does remind me, however, of a story I heard from a former neighbor. He and his wife had a small house in Anaheim and some relatives from out of state had come to visit Disneyland. Naturally, despite the fact that they didn’t know each other very well, family obligations sort of required they at least get together for dinner. So everyone had gathered at the house, and people were trying to remember each other’s names and who was related to who and the conversation was getting pretty awkward…
When suddenly two men armed with pistols smashed through the front door, sprinted through the house, crashed out the back door, and vanished into the night. Seconds later a police chopper roared overhead and cruisers screamed past in the street, culminating in much commotion several blocks away. The neighbor never did find out what happened, but he said it was almost worth having to get the front door repaired with a new (and better) lock, because after that the conversation just flowed.
You never know what’s going to be the icebreaker.
–Bob out
Okay, that bloody well HAD TO FRIGGIN HURT……………
I REALLY hope his new armor can take it
Talk about a trial by fire, GUNFIRE that is
Well, if it can’t then that’s the end of the story. Kinda anticlimactic.
Max’s plot armor won’t allow this to be the end, but things can get rather… messy.
What the? Doesn’t the crazy guy have any respect for comics? doesn’t he know that he’s supposed to shoot at the target on Countdown’s chest?
no respect for tradition…
I like the side story.
Nice way to explain way they just ‘happened’ to be alerted to this, despite the distance.
I should have realized you had something planned.
The downside of dropping into a hotspot the opposite of stealthily, and needing time to orient
I always worried about this happening I’m glad you’re addressing it. Brain dead would be something he couldn’t survive because even though he is technically regular dead because of his heart stoppage. Fortunately because of his travel mechanism, there is no bullet to remove. Hopefully though this gives the sniper a clear shot.
I’m guessing the helmet can take it or at least slow down the bullet enough for the skull to stop it or something like that.
The exposed lower face however constitute a HUGE weakpoint. If that gun had been aimed just a little bit lower Max would have been dead. Dead dead. Dead and not coming back I mean.
“How fatal was it?”
“Completely.”
“I’d like to question him.”
“He’s dead, sir.”
“Darn!”
On the other hand, looking on the bright side, it would greatly simplify his relationship with Sophie.
Ha. That’s funny. You’re funny.
It would simplify the deal girl relationship, but complicate the live crimefighting so very much….
Poor Max needs a running start into these fight.
Maybe some altitude instead? Perhaps our spitfire can consider orienting him horizontally above the crazy people…
If Max had been more than 2 inches taller, he’d be dead… um, actually dead.
What happens if Max ports into occupied space? If the effect was anything like most video games, that would have been pretty useful just now. Then again they could have just popped a fishnet in over the antagonist’s head. 🙂
But Max still returns with any injuries sustained while ‘ported’. So while the bullet would be gone, he’d get to keep his scrambled brains.
What if they teleported a mannequin in order to give the sniper a shot? If agent scales is involved, I doubt this is Max, especially because it’s too far away from his area of operations. I think that the feds figured out a lite version of the teleporter, or maybe just a way to fake it with spirit power.
Eh, going by the word of god in the bobservations, I guess this isn’t the case unless he’s deliberately misleading us. It’d be an interesting and completely plausible solution though (for certain definitions of plausible)!
Only organic material can be teleported. How would you make a realistic mannequin? Well I guess you could just stuff a dead body…
Only mettalic material can’t be ‘ported. Ceramics, plastics, and polymers are all fair game.
Cutting the dramatic entrance short like that? What a buzzkill. Geez, man.
I’ve got question about Second Earth Spitfire: does Marissa have her lightsaber?
Just a Mauser. And Science.
Coming in with an unsolicited blatant plug for Second Earth Spitfire: *loved*it! Exactly what one would expect from an adventure for Marissa. Thanks!
Bless you, sir. If you’d be willing to say so on Amazon, I’ll send you a hi-rez version of Joe’s cover art!
Already did; so as “Amazon Customer”. (For some reason, my tablet doesn’t like me signing in under my own Amazon account — something about the site certificate for the HTTPS connection. Personally, I think that Android is just being difficult to get a rise out ofme.). The cover art will certainly be appreciated, but you’ve already provided me plenty of value for my $0.99 with the story. It brought back plenty of nostalgic memories of reading through my Dad’s collection of pulp magazines back when I was a kid. Once again, Thank You!
Odd, is showing my review on my activity page, but not on the book’s page; could there be a delay between servers updating?
Angle of shot says left side, top of forehead.
Time to see how strong that armour is ^^
Drunken Violent Loser is utterly unfazed by the realization that teleportation exists now? Talk about a tough crowd.
He’s also insane. Never doubt the madman.
hey, as the author said,
when you mess with the crazy, you lose the “WTF” advantage
This could give you a head ache.
Be happy you have a head to ache and pass the aspirin
This rather reminds me of a story out of… I can’t remember if it was Iraq or Afghanistan. A Sergeant rounded a corner and found himself looking down the barrel of a pistol. Which then fired. The guy was stunned for a second and then, assuming the bad guy had missed, pressed forward and captured his attacker who promptly surrendered. The sergeant tasted blood, but didn’t realise what had happened. The bullet had gone through his lip and hit the apex of a tooth, ejecting it from the gum and absorbing the impact (I’m guessing the round had deteriorated and had lower than usual power). He had to have the bullet removed from the gum but he was fine.
Just read your comment on the icebreaker at the party.
Now I can say I’ve heard of a real-life application of Chandler’s Law. (“When in doubt, have a man come through the door with a gun in his hand.” – Raymond Chandler)